Svp quelqu'un peut m'aider merci beaucoup !

Il y a de fault et c la correction sur la photo

ligne 1 ( and she is an amazing woman )
 ligne 15 ( even that they live far away from each other they are still in touch) 
ligne 18 ( it's her husband who posted the canditaturefor her because she didn't have the courage to do it. But now she is so exited about it )  et c tout