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ligne 1 ( and she is an amazing woman )
ligne 14 jusqu'16 (even that they live far away from each other they are still in touch )
ling 18 jusqu' 21 ( it's her husband who posted the canditature for her because she didn't the courage to do it )
 Et c tout.  :)

Two days ago, I met an amazing woman,called Mary.She's 32 and has one four years old daughter. Mary is a writer : she already wrote a book/ she wrote a book  yet. (si elle est écrivaine ; je dirai : she already wrote  a few books : c'est plus crédible)
Since a few weeks, she has been thinking changing her every day life. She'd like to become a nurse. As long as she remembers, she has always wanted to help people. That's  what really matters to her. 
Her husband is an history teacher in high school in Nevada where they all live.
Mary also has a twin sister, Sarah, but she lives in New York. They have always been very close, and even though they live in differents states, they still keep in touch several times a week.
Mary's dream is to come on this show. She would be so happy. Her husband sent her appplication form without telling her because she wouldn't have done it otherwise. Now, she's very excited about it

j'ai essayé de pas trop changer mais d'éviter les répétitions

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