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Bonjour, lundi dernier une assistante anglaise est venue dans ma classe d'anglais Euro. La prof nous a donc demander de prendre dec notes sur elle. le devoir est donc de: Rédiger à partir de vos notes un texte qui décris l'intervenante. Ce texte fera au moins 200 mots et vous le présenterai a l'oral.

Je pense avoir fini mais jai peur qu'il y ai des fautes et/ou des défauts de formulations.

vous trouverez ci-dessous ce que j'ai fais. En espérant vous avoir assez aiguiller merci par avance pour tout aide merci




Her name is Tia and her family name is Sharp. She is 23 years old. She come from of the United States of America, in North of America in Montana, his situated at the north of Montana. The capital of the United States is Washington D.C. Washington is situated on east coastline of the United States.
She was born in Nevada on Carson City. She has got 1 sister. Her name is Terra and she is 20 years old. she has got blond long hair and the blue eyes. She is slim. She isn’t tall.
She is an English assistant. She studied at the university of Montana.
She has got 2 dogs. Their name is Paz and Cruz. Their names are Spanish but they don’t Spanish origin. Her nanny lives in Italy.
She likes reggae, rap and alternative. She likes soccer and more particular the woman’s Nation team of the United states.
Her series prefer is modern family, Vampire Diaries, Pretty Little Liars and How I met your mother. She likes the Thai food.
His prefer region in the United states is state of Washington.
She came from one week ago and until in June. It’s the first trip in France.

1 Réponse

  • n'oublie pas les s avec she
    essaye d'utilisez des connecteurs logiques comme moreover ou furthermore.
    rend le texte plus lineaire avec moins de petities phrases

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