Bonjour est-ce que quelqu'un pourrez corriger mon devoir d'anglais juste en dessous? I am insensitive and sporty I like do sport I love boxing I hate be tired I

Bonjour est-ce que quelqu'un pourrez corriger mon devoir d'anglais juste en dessous?
I am insensitive and sporty
I like do sport
I love boxing
I hate be tired
I want to become a good boxer
I am insensitive and sporty

I can do sport every day
I cannot play music
I must go to school
I must not eat too sweet (trop sucré)
I need to eat a lot (manger beaucoup)
I am insensitive and sporty

I'd like to visit the tower of london
I'd like to be Tike Tyson
I'd like to have 18 years old
I'd like to learn how to become a lawyer
I'd like to see Mike Tyson
I am insensitive and sporty