Bonjour je dois écrire une lettre a ma correspondante anglaise et j'ai écris ça sauf que moi et l'anglais c'est pas génial génial alors est ce que vous pouvez m
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Bonjour je dois écrire une lettre a ma correspondante anglaise et j'ai écris ça sauf que moi et l'anglais c'est pas génial génial alors est ce que vous pouvez me dire ou est-ce que j'ai des faute svp mercii beaucoup de votre aide bonne journée ♥☻☺♥
My name is Alexia Meyer. I am your corresponding. I am shy, sensitive, honest, and Dynamics
I am 14 years old. I am born 4 May 2001.
I live in Nantes near vineyards. I have a big Home with a swimming pool, a big garden, and a pannier of basketball…My parents names are Claudine and Jean-Philippe. My Mother is a dentist, my Dad is a computer scientist. I have two Brothers. Their names are thomas, he is 19 years old and Théo he is 17 years old.
Thomas is in Medicine and Théo is in High school. My Brothers went to go to England in a family
I have two cats called Twister and Dolly, and one dog called Jazzy. I like very much Pets.
I don’t like Vegetables, but I adore Pizza, French fries, spaghetti, singed tart, chocolate, and Candies.
I can’t bear Snakes and spiders.
I can’t stand geography.
I like listening to some music, going out with my friends and especially to amuse me.
I am crazy about the cooking.
I love walking my dog.
My subjects preferred are the English, the German, math and the sport.
I am a basketball lover.
I enjoy playing Basketball with my Friends.
My activities are, running, basketball, Tennis and Dance.
I would like to go to New York and London.
I would like to work for the handicapped children because I like helping the people in difficulties. I feel sick when I see it it is for that I want to give my help.
My dream is to be a good basketball player.
And you?
What is your dream?
Have you got brothers or sisters?
Do you like sport?
What is your job for later?
And what is your Character?
My name is Alexia Meyer. I am your corresponding. I am shy, sensitive, honest, and Dynamics
I am 14 years old. I am born 4 May 2001.
I live in Nantes near vineyards. I have a big Home with a swimming pool, a big garden, and a pannier of basketball…My parents names are Claudine and Jean-Philippe. My Mother is a dentist, my Dad is a computer scientist. I have two Brothers. Their names are thomas, he is 19 years old and Théo he is 17 years old.
Thomas is in Medicine and Théo is in High school. My Brothers went to go to England in a family
I have two cats called Twister and Dolly, and one dog called Jazzy. I like very much Pets.
I don’t like Vegetables, but I adore Pizza, French fries, spaghetti, singed tart, chocolate, and Candies.
I can’t bear Snakes and spiders.
I can’t stand geography.
I like listening to some music, going out with my friends and especially to amuse me.
I am crazy about the cooking.
I love walking my dog.
My subjects preferred are the English, the German, math and the sport.
I am a basketball lover.
I enjoy playing Basketball with my Friends.
My activities are, running, basketball, Tennis and Dance.
I would like to go to New York and London.
I would like to work for the handicapped children because I like helping the people in difficulties. I feel sick when I see it it is for that I want to give my help.
My dream is to be a good basketball player.
And you?
What is your dream?
Have you got brothers or sisters?
Do you like sport?
What is your job for later?
And what is your Character?
2 Réponse
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1. Réponse linalgeria
I was born in .....
But i love pizza
I would like to buy to New York and London
c'est tout ce que j'ai pu corriger je pense qu'il reste quelque petite faute
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2. Réponse alexteissr
Salut! J'ai corriger quelques fautes dans ton texte mais je ne les ai pas relever une par une, je les ai corrigé directement dans le texte !
My name is Alexia Meyer. I am your correspondent. I am shy, sensitive, honest, and dynamic. I am 14 years old. I was born on May, 4th 2001. I live in Nantes near Vineyards. I have a big house with a swimming pool, a big garden, and a basketball hoop… The names of my parents are Claudine and Jean-Philippe. My mother is a dentist and my dad is a computer scientist. I have two brothers. Their names are Thomas, he is 19 years old and Theo he is 17 years old. Thomas is in Medicine and Theo is in High school. My brothers went to England in a family. I have two cats called Twister and Dolly, and one dog called Jazzy. I really like pets.
I don’t like vegetables, but I adore pizza, French fries, spaghetti, singed tart, chocolate, and Candies. I can’t bear snakes and spiders. I can’t stand geography. I like listening to music, hang out with my friends and especially to amuse me. I am crazy about cooking. I love walking my dog. My favourite subjects at school are English, German, Mathematics and Sport. I am a basketball lover. I enjoy playing basketball with my friends. My activities are : running, basketball, tennis and dance. I would like to go to New York and London.
I would like to work for the handicapped children because I like helping people in difficulties. I feel sick when I see it so it's for that, that I want to give my help. My dream is to be a good basketball player.
And you? What is your dream? Do you have any brothers or sisters? Do you like sports? Which job do you want to do for later? What is your character?