Bonjour à tous, je suis en 3ème et ma professeur d'anglais nous a demandé de faire une présentation complète. Voilà mon travail si vous pouvez me le vérifier et
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Bonjour à tous, je suis en 3ème et ma professeur d'anglais nous a demandé de faire une présentation complète. Voilà mon travail si vous pouvez me le vérifier et le corriger si besoin. Merci d'avance !
Hello,
My name is Sarah, I'm 14 years old and I was born in Lyon. I have one sister, Amira and she has 7 years old. I have two brothers: Jamad, he has 12 years old and Salif, he is a baby. I live in Lyon. My mother is childminder and my father is a mason.
I don't practice sports and artistic activities but I like listening to music, reading books (detective novels from Agatha Christie and Conan Doyle), running, spending time with my friends... I dislike go to the swimming pool and watching the horror movies. My kinds of music are French and American rap, hip-hop, funk, soul... I discovered funk music when I went to the concert of Earth, Wind & Fire with my mother. I'm crazy about adventure games and I play with my brother on PlayStation.
My second foreign language is italian because I'm passionate by the Italian culture and I wanted learn this language. My favorite subjects are math, history, french, italian but I'm less interested by biology.
Later, I would like to live abroad for practice my futur job. My goal is to go to the general high school, to get a scientific baccalaureate and then to make engineering studies.
My holidays I spent them with my family. We went in the south of France near Toulon for three weeks. I went to the beach, I visited many beautiful places and I took lots of pictures. The rest of my holidays, I went to the cinema with my friends and I went in Chamonix with my brother, to visit the cave of the Mer de Glace (ice cave).
Hello,
My name is Sarah, I'm 14 years old and I was born in Lyon. I have one sister, Amira and she has 7 years old. I have two brothers: Jamad, he has 12 years old and Salif, he is a baby. I live in Lyon. My mother is childminder and my father is a mason.
I don't practice sports and artistic activities but I like listening to music, reading books (detective novels from Agatha Christie and Conan Doyle), running, spending time with my friends... I dislike go to the swimming pool and watching the horror movies. My kinds of music are French and American rap, hip-hop, funk, soul... I discovered funk music when I went to the concert of Earth, Wind & Fire with my mother. I'm crazy about adventure games and I play with my brother on PlayStation.
My second foreign language is italian because I'm passionate by the Italian culture and I wanted learn this language. My favorite subjects are math, history, french, italian but I'm less interested by biology.
Later, I would like to live abroad for practice my futur job. My goal is to go to the general high school, to get a scientific baccalaureate and then to make engineering studies.
My holidays I spent them with my family. We went in the south of France near Toulon for three weeks. I went to the beach, I visited many beautiful places and I took lots of pictures. The rest of my holidays, I went to the cinema with my friends and I went in Chamonix with my brother, to visit the cave of the Mer de Glace (ice cave).
2 Réponse
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1. Réponse Bonsoirkk
She is 7 years old, he is 12 years old pour le premier paragraphe -
2. Réponse Anonyme
Salut,
des petites corrections:
"My mother is a childminder..."
"I dislike going to the swimming pool or watching horror movies."
" The music genres I like are French and American rap..."
"My second foreign language is italian because I'm passionate about the italian culture and I wanted to learn this language."
"...french, italian but I'm less interested in biology"
"Later I would like to live abroad to practice my future job (...) and then to take engineering studies"
"I spent the holidays with my family."
"...and I went to Chamonix with my brother..."
voila, j'espere que ca t'as aidé.
Amaya13